Make Me Better by Sarah Gailey
My rating: 2 of 5 stars
**2.5-stars**
Make Me Better mainly follows a woman named Celia. She’s struggling in her life. All she wants is a family, and no matter what she does, it’s not happening for her.
Seeking a way to make things better, Celia signs up for something called the Salt Festival, set on an island within the remote community of Kindred Cove. She buys their promise that healing is possible, even for her.

We follow Celia as she arrives at the island and starts to learn what the Salt Festival is all about. The individuals involved in the Festival are all provided lodgings and daily activities to help them to grow and heal.
In addition to Celia in the present timeline, we also get various other perspectives at numerous other periods in time, from months ago, to years ago, of people living at Kindred Cove. It’s a lot to wrap your head around.

At the start of the novel, I was very intrigued by the mysterious tone. I always find Gailey’s writing easy to get into and this was no exception. Unfortunately, the further I got into it, the more it lost my interest and attention.
The story has an interesting premise; Celia, traveling to an island to participate in the Salt Festival that she believes will heal all her woes. I could get behind that. I was ready to find out what her journey was going to be there.

The direction of the story does get pretty f*ed up, NGL, but not in a gruesome, or gory way, just in the truth of what it’s all about. Celia loses herself so deeply, IMO, in such a short amount of time, which honestly makes me sad. I know it’s possible, but still it’s sad to think about. This type of thing probably happens more than we’d like to imagine.
The construction of the story is what I struggled with the most. The time jumps, how random they felt, it made it hard to connect with the story.
I constantly felt like I was getting pushed out of it, and had to actively work to recenter myself in the narrative. It just wasn’t an enjoyable experience. I read for escape and relaxation, and for me, this was not relaxing.

I listened to the audiobook, which has the fabulous Xe Sands as narrator. I love their narration. They’ve done quite a few of Gailey’s novels, so that felt right. While the narration was well done, I feel like the story may have been better served had there been multiple narrators to help make the time periods and perspectives more distinct.
It was really difficult via audio to keep track of where you were in time and who you were following due to the single-person narration, IMO.
However, with all of this being said, just because it didn’t work for me, doesn’t mean it won’t work for you. I’m positive there are Readers out there who are going to be able to relate to Celia’s story, and better track the rest of what is going on, than I could.

Thank you to the publisher, Tor and Macmillan Audio, for providing me with copies to read and review. I always look forward to Gailey’s new releases. Their creativity and confidence to take risks are things I admire.
While this one wasn’t exactly my cup of tea, I’m still glad I gave it shot. You don’t know until you try!






































